RUINE

The Founder’s Desk

The work people do before they choose you

Before someone chooses a business, they have to make sense of it. Look at the unanswered questions the customer is being asked to resolve.

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Editorial illustration created for RUINE.

Somewhere between noticing a business and contacting it, a person has to make sense of what they have encountered.

They read a headline. Open another page. Look for something that resembles their situation. Try to establish what the company does and what will happen if they raise their hand.

We give this movement names inside marketing.

I am interested in the work we ask the person to do.

An unanswered question becomes their assignment

Imagine encountering a company whose website describes a platform, whose presentation describes a service, and whose proposal introduces a third set of names.

Each document may be understandable on its own.

Together, they leave the prospective customer responsible for reconciling the business.

They have to decide whether the names refer to different things. They have to remember which explanation came from whom. They may need another conversation before they can explain the offer to a colleague.

The company experiences this as a slow decision.

The customer is still assembling the thing they are being asked to choose.

Confidence needs somewhere to come from

A confident tone can introduce a claim. The reader still needs a reason to accept it.

A specific example gives them something to examine. A clear service boundary helps them understand the commitment. A description of the first meeting lets them picture what happens after the form.

These details matter because a choice reaches beyond the page.

Someone may need to defend the investment. Involve their team. Admit that the current arrangement has stopped working. Put their name beside a decision whose outcome they cannot fully know.

The business can make those considerations easier to understand. It can also leave them hidden beneath an elegant paragraph.

Examine the hesitation

A pause does not explain itself.

It may come from poor timing, an unsuitable offer, or a question the company has failed to answer. Those possibilities require different decisions.

That is why I resist treating every hesitation as a request for more persuasion.

Look at the materials. Listen to the questions people repeat. Compare what sales promises with what the next document says. Establish where someone has to ask for an explanation that could already have been available.

The Autopsy gives those observations a record. It connects a finding to evidence and names what needs attention.

Sometimes the punch-list item is a substantial piece of work.

Sometimes it is resolving three names for the same service before sending another proposal.

Written by

Whit Hope McDannald

Whit Hope McDannald is the founder of RUINE. She writes about the problem underneath the problem.

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